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The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The graph illustrates the proportion of social
media
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 consumers by groups of
age
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 in
Jamestown
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 in 2018.
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, the highest percentage of the
users
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 of social
media
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 lived in
Jamestown
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 used by adolescents
people
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,
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 the moderate
users
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in
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the
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middle
age
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. The least amount of the population consumes social
media
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 by older
age
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. The groups
of
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the most used social
media
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 were young
people
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for
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around
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three quarters,
in
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between
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the age
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age
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ages
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 of 13 to 25
years
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 and 26 to 35
years
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 40% and 35% respectively.
Whereas
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, the modest
users
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 of program social
media
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 in
Jamestown
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 were between 36-45
years
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 old with just 15% of
users
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.
In contrast
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, the lowest
users
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 of application social
media
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 in
Jamestown
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 by very older
people
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 which is divided into two groups older
people
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 between 46 and 55
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 with around 8% of consumers,
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people
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 aged over 55
years
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 only just 2% of usage social
media
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 in
Jamestown
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words media, age, jamestown, users, people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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