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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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illustrate
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 the levels of production of the main fuels in the UK between the years
of
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apply
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1981 to 2000.
It is clear that
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 the production of coal was the lowest among the other fuels. The coal between the first two years
was remain
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remained
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steadely
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steadily
steady
about
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at about
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 80
million
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tonnes
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. After that, surprisingly
fall
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fell
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 sharply to half the amount of producing.
Then
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increase
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increased
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 slightly in the following year .
The
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apply
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Natural gas was the lowest type of
fuels
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fuel
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 on
produce
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produced
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in
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during the ten years
in
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from
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 1981 to 1991.
Then
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 starts to
rose
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rise
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steadly
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steadily
 to reach one
hundrend
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hundred
million
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tonnes
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 . The
petrleum
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petroleum
 was the highest
comparing
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compared
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 to others. In 1981 the production of it which was about 90
million
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tonnes
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then
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 rose
up
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to reach
to
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140
million
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at the end
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 of 2000.
To sum up
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, the most significant
diffrenet
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difference
were
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was
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 between petroleum and Natural gas approximately one
hundrend
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hundred
million
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tonnes
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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