The chart below shows the number of cat and dog owners in the UK between 1980 and 2015

The chart below shows the number of cat and dog owners in the UK between 1980 and 2015
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The line graph gives information about how many
cat
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and
dog
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owners
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in the UK from 1980 to 2015. It is clear from the graph that
proportion
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the proportion
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of
owners
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who have cats and dogs increased
at the end
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of the period.
Overall
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, the number of
cat
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holders experienced a steady increase throughout the period,
in contrast
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,
dog
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ownership grew rapidly but
then
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declined after 2000. Turning to the details, the figure for
dog
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holders fluctuated between 1980 and 1990. But there was a dramatic growth
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dog
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of dog
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owners
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to 45
million
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in 2000, followed by a gradual decrease to 39
millions
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million
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in 2015.
Cat
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ownership remained almost stable between 7 and 8
million
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from 1980 to a decade later. After 1990, the number of
cat
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owners
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increased significantly from 7
million
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, tripling to 21
million
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by 1995.
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of the period, the number of
cat
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owners
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exceeded that of
dog
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owners
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, reaching 47
million
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cat, dog, owners, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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