The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

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The given graph illustrates the process that produces biofuel called ethanol.

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process consists of four steps starting with growing and and harvesting plants and ending with ethanol produced.

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, plants and trees are grown and mature by absorbing energy from nature

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as sunlight and carbon dioxide.

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, when the harvest crop comes, they are harvested by machines and carried to factories. In the next

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, the plants which are

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called materials, are cut into pieces by a cutting machine in a process called pre-processing, these small pieces are

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turned into cellulose before passing the next

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called processing which happens in a lab, the result of

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is a type of sugar.

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, some microbes are added to the sugar in

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ending

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to create ethanol which is used widely for a variety of means of transportation that emit carbon dioxide into nature again to make a cycle.

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