The maps show a cafe ten years and five years ago, and now. Summarize the information y selecting and eporting the main feautures and make comparissons where relevant

The maps show a cafe ten years and five years ago, and now. Summarize the information y selecting and eporting the main feautures and make comparissons where relevant
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The maps provide information about changing of layout of the
cafe
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in 3 different periods of time.
Overall
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, the layout of the
cafe
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is quite the same just a slight enhancement in some places and adjustments in some parts , especially in the middle of the
cafe
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. Looking closely at 10 years ago, the layout is quite simple, there are 2
teraces
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terraces
traces
on the left side and
right
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side
right
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after entering the
entrance
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, but 5 years later a table was placed at each
entrance
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and now it has enhanced to 2 tables each of the
entrance
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.
Then
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a cash desk on the
right
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corner beside the
entrance
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,
this
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desk is still in the same place until now, there is no change of it. In the middle of
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cafe
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the cafe
a cafe
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, there has been a ring table for the past 10 years,
however
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, it has been modified to a square table now. 2 corners at the back there is food preparation on the left and toilets
in
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on
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the
right
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corner, these two places are quite same from the first time.
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, there is
adjustment
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an adjustment
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beside the cash desk, there is a counter over there.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cafe, right, entrance with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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