A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear friend I am
writting
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writing

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this
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letter to thank you that you are agreed to take care of my house and my
pet
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as well.To add to
this
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, I just want you
give
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to give

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some details about the
pet
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and household chores.
Initially
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, please provide
the
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apply

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food and water to my
pet
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every day and two times
in
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apply

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a day. Everything that you need for
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pet
Correct pronoun usage
your pet

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is in the
draw
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drawing

The verb draw should be in the participle form when used as an adjective. Consider changing the form of this verb.

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cabinet near the
staires
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stairs

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and I marked it with the dog food tag.
Secondly
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, About the domestic chores, please just look into the
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment

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that
Correct word choice
so that

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they are properly switched off.
Also
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, if you have enough time
then
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please clean the guest area because during my return some
guest
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guests

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will come with me. Moving
further
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, if you want to contact me
then
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you have to
sent
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send

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me
a
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an

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mail
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email

The word mail doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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because during the trip my cell phone will remain switched off,
however
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,
i
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I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

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will check
Correct pronoun usage
my mails
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my mails

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mails
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emails
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after
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apply

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every two hours. Thank you Yours
faithjfully
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faithfully

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Gurbakhshish Singh 4 Jan 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider breaking up paragraphs to focus on a single idea, such as pet care or house care, to enhance clarity.
Task Achievement
Be careful of spelling and grammar errors, like 'writting' instead of 'writing' and 'faithjfully' instead of 'faithfully'.
Task Achievement
The writer provided clear instructions for pet care and household duties.
Task Achievement
The tone is suitable, friendly, and appropriately informal.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • grateful
  • contact information
  • emergency
  • feeding schedule
  • exercise routine
  • medical needs
  • vet
  • preferences
  • habits
  • household duties
  • collecting mail
  • watering plants
  • taking out trash
  • comfortable
  • questions
  • warm message
  • enjoy
  • relax
  • have fun
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