A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear friend I am

writting

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writing

this

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letter to thank you that you are agreed to take care of my house and my

pet

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as well.To add to

this

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, I just want you

give

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to give

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some details about the

pet

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and household chores.

Initially

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, please provide

the

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apply

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food and water to my

pet

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every day and two times

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apply

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a day. Everything that you need for

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pet

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your pet

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is in the

draw

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drawing

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cabinet near the

staires

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stairs

and I marked it with the dog food tag.

Secondly

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, About the domestic chores, please just look into the

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

pieces of equipment

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that

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so that

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they are properly switched off.

Also

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, if you have enough time

then

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please clean the guest area because during my return some

guest

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guests

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will come with me. Moving

further

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, if you want to contact me

then

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you have to

sent

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send

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mail

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because during the trip my cell phone will remain switched off,

however

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will check

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my mails

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mails

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emails

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after

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apply

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every two hours. Thank you Yours

faithjfully

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faithfully

Gurbakhshish Singh 4 Jan 2025

hoenytoorSat Jan 04 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider breaking up paragraphs to focus on a single idea, such as pet care or house care, to enhance clarity.

Task Achievement

Be careful of spelling and grammar errors, like 'writting' instead of 'writing' and 'faithjfully' instead of 'faithfully'.

Task Achievement

The writer provided clear instructions for pet care and household duties.

Task Achievement

The tone is suitable, friendly, and appropriately informal.

7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

166 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

grateful
contact information
emergency
feeding schedule
exercise routine
medical needs
vet
preferences
habits
household duties
collecting mail
watering plants
taking out trash
comfortable
questions
warm message
enjoy
relax
have fun

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Some people think the government should provide free education in all levels. Others argue that university students should pay for their education. Discuss both views.

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