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The chart below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending

The chart below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending
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The diagrams illustrate the areas and types of
dance
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 classes that people usually join in a certain town in Australia.
Overall
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, the most common place that people attend
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, is the private studios followed by the school hall.
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,
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 ballet classes are
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highly
 attended by people aged under 11.
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,
students
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 between the ages of 11-16 are largely interested in modern dances.
According to
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 the data, the highest percentage of
students
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 are taking these classes in private studios with 48%.
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, 24% and 18% prefer school halls ( after school time) and common halls, respectively.
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, college-based studios get the lowest number of attendance (10%). Regarding the age group, ballet is the highest type of
dance
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 that
students
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 under 11 are demanding with 600
students
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.
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this
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 number declines in modern
dance
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half (300
students
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), it reaches approximately 430
students
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 in tap
dance
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.
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, the
students
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 aged 11-16 are significantly interested in modern
dance
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 with nearly 530
students
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.
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, the number drops slightly in tap
dance
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 reaching 420, but
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 declines in ballet as it is considered the least interested by
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 age group.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declines" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • attendance
  • community centers
  • dance schools
  • private studios
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • ballroom
  • analysis
  • popularity
  • accessibility
  • cost
  • cultural trends
  • media influences
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