Some people say that the only reason for learning language is in order to travel ro or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been an ongoing debate about learning

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some argue that learning is

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exclusively

for travel or

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career

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, others point out that it is not the main purpose of studying a new

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. In my view,

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learning a new

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will open doors for new job offers, and

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foreign

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opportunities

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consequently

we have more reasons to study

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. I will discuss both views below. One

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reason why

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learn a new

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is to get a prestigious job,

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the

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must achieve one of the critical

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requirements

for

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foreign

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of local jobs in some countries, which is a

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language

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, which will help the junior

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employee

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to adapt faster, communicate well, and do works

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efficiently

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a salesman

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job

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mostly on how he is good

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communication, and

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customers to buy the product,

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type of

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need a

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is speaks

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the

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and has abilities to understand

people

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. Another important advantage of studying a

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is to help

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explore a new country. That makes

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more involved with

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to be visited by talking

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their

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, in public transportation, tourists with

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multilinguistic

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can

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more freely to

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, get to know them, and make connections.

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the great benefits

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learning

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in order to travel or work, mastering

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languages

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has a significant cultural exchange. As we are living in a small world we need to know each other, communicate,

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how others

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, that will expand our perspective in life,

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certain

things

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in South Asia as

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tradition

, and

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is not written in English books.

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you can dig more about it in their own books, or by asking them directly, thusly learned

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will be a helpful tool. In

addtion

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addition

to that, Learning

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is a great tool to access more resources,

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as books, media, and

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instance

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most

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plays

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all over the world will be played in

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will be a slang

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any foreign attended these plays need to know

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language

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and some idioms.

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conclusion

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, learning

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play

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a significant role

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shaping individuals,

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and help

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help

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helping

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getting

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jobs and

traveling

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However

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by offering other benefits

such

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as culture exchange, and access to more resources, learning

languages

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provide

people

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with

tools

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the tools

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they need to succeed in the modern world.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

406 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
global mobility
career advancement
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heritage language
academic pursuit
cultural authenticity
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