Climate change is an important global issue. Rising temperatures, extreme weather events, and environmental loss hurt our planet. Individual actions (such as recycling and taking public transportation) are the solution to reducing climate change. Do you agree or disagree?
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Your essay addresses the task by discussing individual actions that can help to mitigate climate change, showing a reasonable take on the issue.
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