The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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number
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families
in Use synonyms
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the US
according to
their annual Linking Words
income
in the Use synonyms
years
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of
2007,2011 and 2015.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of households between the wage Use synonyms
range
of $50,000-$74,999 shows a constant trend in all three Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
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number
of Use synonyms
families
in the rest of the Use synonyms
income
ranges depicts a Use synonyms
fluctuated
trend in the given Replace the word
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years
.
When compared to the Use synonyms
number
in 2007, Use synonyms
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families
in the Use synonyms
range
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an increase in the year Wrong verb form
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2011 by 4 Change preposition
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millions
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has
decreased Unnecessary verb
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up
to 28 Change preposition
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millions
in 2015. Change to singular
million
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contrast,
number
of the wage rate of $25,000-$49,999 has increased in 2011 and 2015. Use synonyms
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the highest Add a comma
hand,
income
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range
shows a significant rise in 2015 compared to 2007 and 2011.
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teems
of the annual Correct your spelling
terms
income
, the figure of middle Use synonyms
income
has always remained throughout the Use synonyms
years
. It is important to note that Use synonyms
majority
of the Correct article usage
the majority
families
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states
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income
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range
, Use synonyms
where as
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whereas
low
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low-income
income
remained always less.Use synonyms
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