The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The chart below illustrates
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information about the
number
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of
families
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in
US
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the US
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according to
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their annual
income
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in the
years
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of
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2007,2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, the
number
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of households between the wage
range
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of $50,000-$74,999 shows a constant trend in all three
years
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.
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the
number
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of
families
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in the rest of the
income
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ranges depicts a
fluctuated
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trend in the given
years
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. When compared to the
number
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in 2007,
the
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families
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in the
range
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of less than $25,000
demonstrates
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an increase in the year
of
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2011 by 4
millions
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million
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which again
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decreased
up
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to 28
millions
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million
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in 2015.
In
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contrast
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contrast,
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the
number
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of the wage rate of $25,000-$49,999 has increased in 2011 and 2015.
On the other
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hand
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hand,
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the highest
income
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range
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shows a significant rise in 2015 compared to 2007 and 2011. In
teems
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terms
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of the annual
income
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, the figure of middle
income
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has always remained throughout the
years
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. It is important to note that
majority
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the majority
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of the
families
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in United
states
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are in the highest
income
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range
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,
where as
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whereas
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the figures for middle and
low
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low-income
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income
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remained always less.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, families, income, years, range with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • income bracket
  • distribution
  • proportion
  • household
  • economy
  • economic recession
  • income inequality
  • income distribution
  • wealth
  • increase/decrease
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • noticeable
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