The chart below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010
The bar chart depicts educational stages by various ages in Glasgow, situated in Scotland, during 2010,
whereas
the pie chart illustrates education ranks for gender in any Linking Words
age
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groups
for Glasgow in Scotland, in 2010.
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sort
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sorted
ages
had the most for Fix the agreement mistake
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university
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a university
degree
, with no qualifications had the least. Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
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level
of education for school certificates had the most for both Correct article usage
the level
gender
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while
no qualifications got the same amount
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high
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learners especially younger Use synonyms
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at roughly 71%-76%, with older Use synonyms
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between 25% and 50%. In terms of school Use synonyms
certificate
, approximately 15% to 20% of Fix the agreement mistake
certificates
age
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groups
from 16 to 75 had Use synonyms
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level
, six times more than the 75+ group. Use synonyms
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for youngsters Use synonyms
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relatively the same at exactly 9% with 50-75 and 75+ Verb problem
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consisted
of 30% and 72%, respectively.
Turning to the remaining statistics where school certificate rank made up the most for both Wrong verb form
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gender
(around 38%). As for university Change to a plural noun
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degree
, both sexes had the same proportion of 33%. Meanwhile, no qualifications rank ranged from 29%-32% for men and women.Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
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