The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first pie chart displays the average energy use at homes in Australia.
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, the other pie chart illustrates the Linking Words
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of carbon Use synonyms
emissions
from Australian households.
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Overall
, there are seven categories of energy use in Australian households, the most energies consumed are heating and Linking Words
water
heating, Use synonyms
while
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heating and other appliances have the highest rates of greenhouse gas Use synonyms
emissions
.
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Firstly
, Australian households use a large Linking Words
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of power on heating which is 42% , and in second place Use synonyms
of
using electricity is for Change preposition
apply
water
heating and other appliances with 30% and 15% respectively. Use synonyms
However
, the consumption of power on refrigeration, lighting, and cooling is relatively the same at 7%,4%, and 2% respectively.
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Secondly
, the carbon Linking Words
emissions
of Use synonyms
water
heating and other devices have the highest rates of toxic gases nearly 32% and 28%. The greenhouse gases from refrigeration and heating have the same Use synonyms
amount
of carbon Use synonyms
emissions
14% and 15% respectively. The percentage of lightning and cooling have a tiny Use synonyms
amount
of gases with 8 per cent and 3 per cent.Use synonyms
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