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The maps below show changed in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changed in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps display how Nelson
City
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 changed in recent times.
Overall
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, in the present time, the
city
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 is completely modernized to become more residential and commercial with the addition of markets, shops and apartments. The only natural thing that seemed relatively untouched was the port. In the north-west of the
city
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, a new hall of residence was developed. The train station was demolished and relocated between the university and the
city
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centre
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. In the northeast, the trees were cleared and a new shopping
centre
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 was built. A tramline was developed to connect a building which is near the university with the
city
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centre
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. On the right side of the
city
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centre
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 , the old market was demolished and a new shop was built. The
city
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centre
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 has become a place where people can rent bicycles . A new covered market was constructed at the west of Nelson Center. The most noticeable change is the street which is changed and dedicated to pedestrians only. In the south-west of the
city
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, a restaurant was developed and new bars and clubs were added at the south-east of Nelson
city
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 near the port.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changed" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • modifications
  • upgrades
  • facilities
  • commercial areas
  • residential zones
  • green spaces
  • recreational facilities
  • industrial areas
  • environmental conservation
  • eco-friendly
  • pollution control
  • distinct difference
  • notable change
  • expansion
  • decline
  • transformation
  • enhancement
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