The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart compares the key information between three tourist destinations - the coast, mountains, the lakes - in Europe Country, from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the coast is the top popular destination for travellers Linking Words
whereas
the lakes are the least favourite for them.
At the beginning of the year, there are 40,000 people who travel to the coast. Following that, Linking Words
this
destination remarkably stood out Linking Words
at the end
of the year, reaching 70 thousand visitors despite a slight decline in 1992. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the mountain areas have only experienced substantial growth from 20K to 35K people. In terms of the lakes, the area is not really famous compared to other types in 1987, accounting for only ten thousand travellers. Linking Words
However
, in 1997, it increased significantly until achieved a peak of 70,000 visitors. Unfortunately, the tourist spot declined to 50 thousand people Linking Words
at the end
of the year.Linking Words
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