Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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to using alternate ways of
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who are committed murder or rape.
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necessary to give them strict
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longer prison.
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believe that to decline
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is committed. Sometimes it is acceptable
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conclusion,In my opinion,
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strict rules
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against them. Mention with try to give them lifetime cell.
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helpful to reduce
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