The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the changes in the
town
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of Stromer since 1995
Overall
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, the Stromer has become more residential and recreational with the introduction of a range of a new facility. It is
also
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clear that the majority of modifications took place on the right side of the
town
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Focusing on the 1995 plan, On the one hand , we can look at a map of the Farmland
is
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located from the bottom, with a
forest
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to the right and a
forest
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to the light . There was
in addition
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a shop , featuring a house around that and behind which was to the houses .
However
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, the
forest
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was located on both sides of the
town
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. Since
then
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, applying to Stromer experienced significant changes . Expect to apply to newly-built apartments near apply to the farmland and the left wings of
town
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remain almost the same ,
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, the
forest
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has made way for the airport to the right part .
On the other hand
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, where the houses are , there is now a school with shops . The final altercation is the construction of the apartments next to the
forest
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, forest with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • residential buildings
  • green spaces
  • commercial areas
  • shopping mall
  • parking facilities
  • river
  • marina
  • tourism
  • leisure activities
  • transportation infrastructure
  • roads
  • roundabout
  • access
  • industrial area
  • community center
  • town square
  • residents
  • social interaction
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