Some people believe that individuals should be allowed to own a gun as a means to protect themselves and their families. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
It is thought that individuals should possess firearms to ensure the safety of their families and themselves.
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essay completely disagrees with Linking Words
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statement because possession of Linking Words
weapons
increases risks and accidents in communities Use synonyms
along with
difficulty in regulating them.
On the one hand, possessing Linking Words
guns
for protecting family members or themselves is unreasonable Use synonyms
due to
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weapons
raise risk rates in some situations. Use synonyms
For example
, children are very curious and the likelihood of shooting accidents if their parents have not hidden the Linking Words
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carefully. Use synonyms
Additionally
, these Linking Words
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might be used by irresponsible people and use them even in unimportant situations Use synonyms
such
as high school in Serbia one of the students used his father’s Linking Words
gun
and shot ten of his classmates and two teachers because they old argued with with him. Use synonyms
Hence
, nowadays every country has a police and authorities to protect citizens no need to have a Linking Words
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to ensure security.
Another reason if everyone has a Use synonyms
gun
that means the government is incapable of regulating these Use synonyms
weapons
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Guns
have serial numbers and authorities must have Use synonyms
this
information, but when everyone has the right to have one. It will be difficult to collect all these numbers and even some will possess a Linking Words
gun
without a license. Use synonyms
For instance
, some murder crimes-related Linking Words
guns
are unsolved because it is difficult to know without the information the weapon used. Use synonyms
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, possession Linking Words
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encourages violence and crime in our society.
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although
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guns
provide security and safety for individuals or their families, I would argue that Use synonyms
weapons
increase the risks and accidents which are more hazardous to society. Use synonyms
Additionally
, there are difficulties in regulating them by the government which likely raises crime in many countries.Linking Words
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