The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015, and 2017.

The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015, and 2017.
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The bar charts illustrate the percentage of various media that are being accessed by
people
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in one particular country in three different years, which are in 2013, 2015, and 2017.
Overall
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, the proportion of
people
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using television fluctuated in the period given,
while
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newspaper and radio decreased gradually and the internet on any device was the opposite. The number of
people
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using television was the highest each year compared to others, starting at 80% before decreasing to less than 70% and rising to slightly over 70% in 2017.
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, the internet category noticeably rose from around 30% to 40% in 2015 before escalating to nearly 70% in the final year, which showed a substantial increase. In comparison, the number of individuals using printed newspapers continuously dropped from over 40% to 30% and markedly went down to about 20% in 2017, which was the lowest percentage in all categories, indicating moderate changes over the period.
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, the proportion of
people
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accessing radio
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vaguely declined from more than 30% to exactly 30% in 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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