The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart shows the graduate pathway for undergraduate
Anthropology
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students in one university. The table illustrates the salaries of
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graduates after 5
years'
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work
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in three types of
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employment
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, namely
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freelance consultants, the government
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and private companies. It could be inferred from the pie chart that over half (52%) of the
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graduates work full-time after their graduation. From the table,
it is clear that
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among the three types of occupation, anthropologists working for the government earn the most, with 50% of them being paid $100,000 or more. Looking into more details of the pie chart, the second
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destination for
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anthropology
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students is shown to be part-time employment, taking up 15% of the total survey samples.
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figure is narrowly followed by the 12% of those who do not have a job. Graduate anthropologists who choose to pursue a postgraduate degree occupy 13%, with 8%
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to full-time postgraduate study and 5%
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to do part-time
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jobs
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while
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finishing their
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. 40% of the
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graduates working as freelance consultants earn $100,000 or more after
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five years of
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works
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,
this
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figure is mirrored by the 40% of the same cohorts who are paid $75000 - $99999. Only 5% of the government sector anthropologists earn $25000 - $49999, compared to
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10%
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those who are employed by private companies. For
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least-paid group (private companies employees), 35% of them own a salary ranging from $50000 - $74999.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words anthropology with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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