The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Wite the essay in 150 words.
The maps provide key information about
Stokeford
plan, highlighting substantial development, with several features either transformed or constructed.
Correct article usage
the Stokeford
Overall
, it is clear from the maps that Stokeford Linking Words
have been
undergone Wrong verb form
has
with
a variety of improvements. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, the Linking Words
city
in 1930 Use synonyms
offers
a variety of facilities, Wrong verb form
offered
whereas
the current layout is strategically Linking Words
desgined
with different facilities and services.
Correct your spelling
designed
According to
what is shown from the past map, the Linking Words
city
Use synonyms
consist
of a river, farmland and gardens. River Stoke is alongside the Change the verb form
consists
city
with a bridge Use synonyms
at the end
of Linking Words
area
. Add an article
the area
In
the right side there is a farmland with a variety of cows. The bridge is connected to a road in the Change preposition
On
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
city
where a number of houses are transformed Use synonyms
to
shops and a post office which are located Change preposition
into
in
the left side of the road. Opposite Change preposition
on
to
the Change preposition
apply
road
there is a primary school and a garden next to it.
In terms of the current layout, all shops are demolished and replaced by houses, Add a comma
road,
while
the post office Linking Words
stayed
in the same place. The number of houses has increased significantly Wrong verb form
stays
whereas
the garden Linking Words
is
transformed Wrong verb form
has been
to
a retirement home.Change preposition
into
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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