The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The graph illustrates the
exports
percentage of Australia to four different countries from 1990 to 2012. Change the noun form
export
Overall
, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
Japan
Use synonyms
starts
as the highest export partner for Australia, China overlapped Wrong verb form
started
Japan
in 2010 to Use synonyms
became
the first in the Wrong verb form
become
last
period of the data with a consistent rise throughout the period.
Linking Words
Japan
Use synonyms
start
as the highest for Australian exports with Wrong verb form
started
the
Correct article usage
a
number
of around 26% in 1990, Use synonyms
then
it steadily decreased throughout the time. In 2010, Linking Words
Japan
's share was overtaken by China and sat Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
in
the
second place with 16% of Correct article usage
apply
export
in 2012. The United States's figure was more fluctuated than others, starting at around 11% in 1990, restoring its former share in 2000, and Fix the agreement mistake
exports
then
Linking Words
decline
to 5% in 2010 before it slightly rose to around 6% in 2012.
China became the most progressive country in terms of being the destination for Australian Wrong verb form
declining
export
. Fix the agreement mistake
exports
While
it Linking Words
start
at relatively a low level at just 3% in 1990, the Wrong verb form
started
number
steadily increased to 5% in 2000 before it Use synonyms
had
experienced a significant boom, making the share Unnecessary verb
apply
to
a staggering Change preposition
apply
number
of approximately 28% in 2012. Use synonyms
Comparing
to the other nations in the data, India Wrong verb form
Compared
persist
to Change the verb form
persists
became
the lowest among all, starting with 3% of shares in 1990. India's Change the form of the verb
become
number
Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
rise
until 2010 and overtook the United Wrong verb form
rose
State's
position with a proportion of 7%, but Change noun form
States
then
it fell to 5% in 2012 and made it Linking Words
sat
Wrong verb form
sit
on
fourth position again in the Change preposition
in
last
period.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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