The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of gorillas in the wild between 1990 and 2015.

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of gorillas in the wild between 1990 and 2015.
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The bar chart provides the alterations in the biggest quantity of
gorillas
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in nature over 25 years.
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, it shows the population of
gorillas
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in 7 different regions, including the Central African Republic, Angola, Cameroon, Nigeria, Rwanda, Uganda and Gabon, in 1990 and in 2015. The highest
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of monkeys was in Urganda over 8,000 followed by the Central African Republic, where the estimated
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was over 5,000 in 1990.
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, in 1990, the population of
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in Nigeria was roughly the same as in Rwanda, about 2,500.
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, the lowest quantity of animals could be noticed in Angola, Cameroon and Gabon, nearly 1,500
at the end
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of the twentieth century. The statistics in 2015 were approximately the same as in 1990. Uganda was home to most of the
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, around 7,500 after 25 years.
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, the next largest
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of animals was in Africa where the
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was almost unchanged, under 1,500, in 2015.
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, in Rwanda, it decreased by almost half.
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, the other 4 countries didn't undergo serious changes compared to 1990
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