The process diagram details the steps by which liquid chocolate is produced from cocoa beans. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate. (Minh Bùi)
The given diagram describes how to make
chocolate
from raw cocoa Use synonyms
beans
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Overall
, making Linking Words
chocolate
is an artificial linear includes 10 steps which start with growing cocoa trees and end with liquid Use synonyms
chocolate
produced
Looking at the diagram from a more detailed perspective, first of all, cacao trees are grown in tropical regions namely Indonesia, Use synonyms
and
South America, and Africa. When the red pod ripen, the cocoa Correct word choice
apply
beans
which are white are harvested by the farmer. In the next stage, the harvested Use synonyms
beans
are put in the leaves and fermented to achieve Use synonyms
the
special flavour. Correct article usage
a
Secondly
, the fermented Linking Words
beans
are Use synonyms
spreaded
in sunlight to dry. Correct your spelling
spread
Then
, the dried Linking Words
beans
are packed in large sacks and weighed before being transported by train or lorry to a factory and followed by being stored in the factory. Use synonyms
Thirdly
, the stored Linking Words
beans
are roasted at a high temperature of 350 Celsius degree. Use synonyms
Last
but not least, the roasted Linking Words
beans
are split into crushed Use synonyms
beans
and the counterpart which is taken away is the outer shell before the inner part of the Use synonyms
beans
which is pressed to produce liquid Use synonyms
chocolate
.Use synonyms
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