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The table and the bar chart below give information about travelling to work in Houston, Texas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and the bar chart below give information about travelling to work in Houston, Texas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows data on the types of
transport
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 and the
age
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 of drivers in Houston. The diagram shows the amount of CO2 emissions into the atmosphere from various modes of
transport
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. The most popular
transport
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 is a car for one. 48
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percent
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per cent
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 of Houston residents use
this
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transport
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 at the average
age
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 of 43.
This
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 is the most harmful
transport
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 for the environment.
Such
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 a machine emits more than 0.3 kilograms of CO2 per
kilometer
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kilometre
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. The second most popular is public
transport
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. It is used by 37
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percent
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per cent
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 of
people
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at
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with
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the
Correct article usage
an
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 average
age
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 of 47.
This
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 is one of the most environmentally friendly modes of
transport
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. Public
transport
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 emits about 0.01 kilograms of CO2 per
kilometer
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kilometre
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 into the air. The third most popular car is for 4
people
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.
This
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 method of transportation is used by 11
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percent
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per cent
show examples
 of
people
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at
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with
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the
Correct article usage
an
show examples
 average
age
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 of 44.
This
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 type of
transport
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 emits approximately 0.65 kilograms of CO2 per
kilometer
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kilometre
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. The most unpopular form of transportation is cycling or walking. Only 4
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percent
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per cent
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 of
people
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 move
this
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 way. But at the same time, it is the most environmentally friendly way to travel. There are no harmful emissions from walking and cycling. At the average
age
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 of 39,
people
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 choose walking or cycling.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, age, co, percent, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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