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The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart provides key information about three categories of
visitors
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, which are Adults, aged under 15, and special exhibitions at a museum from the years 1997 to 2012. The units are measured in numbers.
Overall
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 it is clear from the graph that throughout the years adult
visitors
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 have the highest rate of visiting the museum,
whereas
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 the special exhibition
visitors
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 had the lowest numbers. In terms of special exhibition
visitors
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, their number started with 28,00
visitors
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 in 1997
then
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 slightly increased to 29,200,
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,
visitors
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 under the age of 15 began with 120,000
visitors
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then
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 witnessed a considerable decrease to 110,000
visitors
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, but the group of Adult
visitors
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 were 300,100
visitors
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 in 1997
then
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 represent a modest increase to 302,200.
According to
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 what is shown in 2007 the number of adult
visitors
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 skyrocketed to 400,500
visitors
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,
while
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 the groups aged under 15 and special exhibitions together had a significant decrease respectively, calculated to be a total of 525,200
visitors
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 in that year, which was the highest number throughout the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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