The table below shows average climate conditions in Dak Lak province, Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Zhaina

The table below shows average climate conditions in Dak Lak province, Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Zhaina
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The table below illustrates the average climate
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exactly in Dak Lak province in Vietnam.
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, the table provides the lowest number
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the beginning and the end of the year, meanwhile, the highest number
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category was in the summer month. So,
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there are lower numbers than in October or November. In December and
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weather remains at its mildest 21.2 and 21.4
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, promptly increasing to 26
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in April and May.
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, the majority of rainfall
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in September with 434 hours,
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the opposite side of
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statistic took February with only 1 hour of rainfall.
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, March had the most sunshine and accounted for 240 hours,
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, as we can see the lowest number is in humidity rather than other months with 74%.
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,the highest temperature is in May and April with 26
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and the lowest one is in January.
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