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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in Netherland between 2001 and 2006. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in Netherland between 2001 and 2006. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.
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The table provides key information about the travelling distance in
miles
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 classified by transportation modes. The units are measured in
miles
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that the majority of
people
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 travel in 2006 using a variety of ways.
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, the most preferable way of transporting was using cars,
whereas
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 taxis and
bicycle
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bicycles
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 present a low interest among
people
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 in terms of travelling.
According to
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 what is shown in 2001, the total of
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 spent
in
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travelling was 4740
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,
while
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 in 2006 it rose to 6475
miles
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. Travelers prefer cars as a transport mode with a total of 3199
miles
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 in 2001 with an increase
by
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of
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 1607
miles
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 in 2006.
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,
people
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 travelled by taxis in 2001 and 2006 with a total of 13 and 42
miles
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 respectively.
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 travelling by Bicycles faced a decline
by
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of
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 10
miles
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 as it reached 41
miles
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 in 2006, using trains as a way to travel
face
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faced
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 a rise to 366
miles
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. In terms of walking,
people
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 walked
for
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255
miles
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 in 2001 to travel,
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, in 2006, they spent only 237
miles
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. Travelling using local buses faced a sharp decline to 274
miles
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 in 2006,
however
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, local distance buses grew to 124
miles
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.
Moreover
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, there are other transportation modes that
people
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used
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 and it face an increase from 450 to 585
miles
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 annually.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words miles, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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