Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the lossDiscuss both these views and give your own opinion.of particular species of plants and animals.Others say thatthere are moreimportant environmental problems. Give reasons for youranswer and include any relevant examples from your ownknowledge or experience.

In recent years, the severity of environmental problems has generated widespread debate.

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some argue that the main issue lies

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the risks of biodiversity, others are of the opinion that there are more significant environmental matters waiting to be resolved. From my perspective, the

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endangered plants and wildlife

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more relatively with the threat to the environment. Global warming is a frequently mentioned

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among the public.

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, it is human activities that are the main culprits behind the climate change. Excessive logging by people not only causes soil erosion in forests

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reduces carbon sequestration capacity.

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, the massive burning of fossil fuels in industries and the exhaust emissions from cars have accelerated carbon dioxide emissions, leading to an increase

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the surface temperature. But many people including myself

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pay more attention to the

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of plant and animal life. As is known to all, the balance of an ecosystem fundamentally includes producers, predators, consumers and decomposers. Any of the extinction of creatures will be a

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to the food chain, leading to the decline of the self-regulation ability of

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into destruction. To take an example, if bees

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into extinct, the survival of many plants that rely on bees will

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be affected. What’s more, As part of the important sources of human economy, food,

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materials, the disappearance of biodiversity will indirectly affect human

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, causing more potential

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. In conclusion,

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other environmental issues

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as global warming

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under concern, I still hold the perspective that the

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of particular plants and animals attach the most relevance to the main environmental problem, affecting the stability of the ecosystem.