The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
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The maps illustrate the floor plan of a central public
library
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as it was 20 years ago and
compared
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its current layout.
Overall
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, the public
library
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has only a main entrance on the south side of the floor. Recently, the
library
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has developed and added advanced facilities
such
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as self-service machines, computers, and a cafe shop. All tables are chairs removed completely from the
library
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hall.
Firstly
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, in the eastern
part
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of the
library
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, there was an enquiry desk for services
such
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as tickets, book returns, …etc.
However
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, it converted completely into a cafe. Adult non-
books
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were removed and replaced by several services like areas for adult fiction
books
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, an information desk, and self-service machines which facilitate access for people.
Children’s
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books
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in the northeast
part
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of
books
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relocated into the northeast
room
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and expanded
this
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room
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for children with added more facilities for them like a storytelling events area with 2 sofas and
children’s
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fiction
books
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. there are
lectures
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room
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instead
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of the
children’s
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books
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room
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in the northern
part
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of the
library
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.
Secondly
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, a reading
room
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in the southern
part
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of the
library
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is converted to a computer
room
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which is opposite the cafe. The area between the
children’s
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room
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and the computer
room
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is used for all reference
books
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instead
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of adult fiction
books
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. The hall now is empty and all tables and chairs removed from it.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead, such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, part, books, children’s, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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