The chart below give information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summaries information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about how
families
spend their weekly Use synonyms
income
in Use synonyms
one
country which is categorized into 8 different types of needs in 1968 and 2018. The number of Use synonyms
income
is measured by percentages.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that, over the whole Linking Words
period
as a whole, Use synonyms
families
expenditure on food category fell significantly.
Looking closely at the chart, some categories of needs experienced a sharp decrease. in 1968, Use synonyms
families
spent their weekly Use synonyms
income
stood at 35% from their weekly Use synonyms
income
which Use synonyms
reaching
a peak Wrong verb form
reached
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
. Use synonyms
However
, it experienced a dramatic fall to more than a fifth of their weekly Linking Words
income
. Clothing and footwear Use synonyms
also
show a similar pattern, Linking Words
whereas
show a decrease trend from Linking Words
one
in ten Use synonyms
at
the first Change preposition
in
period
to Use synonyms
one
in twenty Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
. Nex, in fuel and power and personal goals, Use synonyms
families
Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
Use synonyms
not
spend their weekly Add a missing verb
do not
income
as much as they used to referring to the first Use synonyms
period
.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, some types of needs witnessed growth Linking Words
such
as housing, transportation and leisure activities. Housing experienced almost double in 2018 reaching almost 20%. Transportation and leisure activities had a fair trend for the first time counted at less than Linking Words
one
in ten. Use synonyms
However
, those two categories made up significantly more than 15% and more than 20% respectively. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the percentage of household goods remains steady at under Linking Words
one
in ten.Use synonyms
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