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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the different ages of people living in Iceland between 1990 and 2020. All in all, the
size
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 of the 25-54
age
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group
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 increased the most over the period
while
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 the
size
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 of the two younger
age
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 groups decreased a little bit. The number of people in the two older
age
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 groups stayed about the same. The 25-54
age
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group
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 grew from approximately a third of the
population
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 in 1990 to nearly half of the
population
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 in 2020. The older two
age
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 groups did not increase or decrease much. The
size
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 of the 65 and over
age
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group
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 remained at about 13%,
whereas
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 the
size
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 of the 55 -64
age
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group
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 only fell from about 14% to about 10% of the
population
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.
By contrast
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, the 0-14
age
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group
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 fell from just over 25% in 1990 to just under 20% in 2020.
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, the 15-24
age
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group
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 dropped from just over 20% of the
population
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 in 1990 to just under 10% of the
population
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 in 2020.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words size, age, group, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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