The bar charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

The bar charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
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The bar chart illustrates
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compare
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the primary reason for studying among different age groups, focusing on younger versus older
students
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. Younger
students
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might
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primarily
be
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pursuing
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education for job chair,
whereas
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older
student
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students
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could be more interested
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development.
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chart gives information about the
support
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changes with age, suggesting that younger
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may
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receive
more advice than older people
while
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elder
students
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being
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more experienced than younger
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.
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, the younger
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students
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motivation for study, and the kind of
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expected from employers,
otherwise
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older
students
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purpose for individual
skill
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, and they are less
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support
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on
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workplace
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the workplace
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. Another significant group was 40-49 ages
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students'
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reason for study,
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students
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learning for equally
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career and
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interests
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. Regarding reasons for
study
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studying
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in
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middle ages
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community, they were more
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by other workers than younger employers. Examine potential societal impacts of the varying motivations and
support
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seen
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across
different age groups, like implications for
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workforce
development and lifelong learning trends.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, support with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age groups
  • career advancement
  • personal development
  • employer support
  • external aid
  • correlation
  • intrinsic motivation
  • career enhancement
  • societal impacts
  • workforce development
  • lifelong learning
  • primary reasons
  • motivation for study
  • part-time studies
  • career-oriented
  • personal interest
  • educational pursuit
  • study motivation
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