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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compasions where relevant. Wirte at least 150 words.

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The line chart provides key information about the consumption of fish and other diverse kinds of
meat
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 in
an
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 European country, throughout the time ranging from 1979 to 2004. The units are measured in
numbers
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that consuming fish has experienced constant growth throughout the mentioned period.
Whereas
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, lamp's and beef's meats indicated fluctuated figures.
According to
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 the data shown, fish figures started at a significant 148 in 1979 and increased to 250 in 2004, which is considered the highest number through the interval.
While
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 lamp's
meat
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 usage started the period with150 and plunged to less than 100 by 2004. In terms of beef
meat
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, it is obvious that it demonstrated a substantial 220 in 1974; but it experienced a decline to
approximately180
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approximately 180
 in 1984.
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, the consumption
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 fluctuated until the year of 1999.
Thereafter
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, the
numbers
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 had a constant decrease to the end of the period.
To sum up
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, consuming chicken
meat
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 has remained stable and their
numbers
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 did not exceed 100.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, numbers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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