The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides data
of
Change preposition
on
families
' average weekly spending in a particular nation
during Use synonyms
years
1968 and 2018. The Correct article usage
the years
income
provided is in percentage.
Over Use synonyms
all
there has been significant change by 2018 compared with 1968. leisure has Add a comma
all,
over taken
food becoming the highest percentage of Correct your spelling
overtaken
income
spent.Use synonyms
Household
has the same percentage in both Add an article
The household
A household
the
years which is 7%
food was the category where Correct article usage
apply
families
spent most of their Use synonyms
income
which is 35% but it decreased 17%percent in 2018. The other categories in 1968 never crossed 10% of the weekly Use synonyms
income
. Use synonyms
However
, categories Linking Words
such
as housing,leisure and transport increased by 7%, 5%and 15% respectively.
in 2018 fuel and power, clothing and footwear and personal goods have dropped below 10%. fuel and power Linking Words
has
fallen by 3 % but still is the lowest category on which Change the verb form
have
the
Correct article usage
apply
families
Use synonyms
spent
.
to summarize, Wrong verb form
spend
families
spending Use synonyms
spenading
have changed previously most focus was on food and it has changed to leisure. Correct your spelling
spending
while
fuel and power are still lowest and household goods are still same unchanged.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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