Some people think that young people should follow traditions of the society. While other people think that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

There is an issue arising amongst the

society

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where some people state that it is a must for the young generation to follow the

society

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's

traditions

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,

however

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, the other

believe

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that young generations have their own

willing

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to behave. The following paragraph will discuss

further

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regarding

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the upside and downside from both points of view, and ultimately end with a conclusion.

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, as the upside, following the

traditions

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within societies will shape the youngest

become

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humble individuals. They can easily adapt and

dwelve

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weave

themselves into the community.

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, there is a tradition

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the youngest should get

merried

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married

at the age of approximately 25 years

old

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apply

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, so, when they obey

this

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rule

means

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they will easily

adapting

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in

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the

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society

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. Meanwhile,

for

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the downside,

the

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young generations will not be

a

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free

individual

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individuals

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since they have the

obilgation

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obligation

the

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strict with

the

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society

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traditions

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, when they can not

fullfil

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fulfil

the

marriege

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marriage

traiditions

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traditions

tradition

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that mentioned age mean they will not be accepted in the communities.

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, the advantage of the youngest to be a free individual is they can decide their own future without interventions from the others.

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, they can decide at what age they want to be

merried

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married

without any hesitations of acceptance in

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society

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.

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, there is

also

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the disadvantage of

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principle. The young generations will grow as individuals who probably do not respect

to

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their

surrounding

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surroundings

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. In conclusion, there are downsides and upsides

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these two principles.

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, as an individual, they should have their own right to decide their future but with

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respect to the

traditions

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within their communities.