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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant. (Bar Chart)

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant. (Bar Chart)
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The bar chart illustrates
amount
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the amount
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 of 4 types of waste (paper, glass, tin, garden) which were collected by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015. Units are measured in
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, the highest quantity of all types of garbage was collected in 2015,
on the contrary
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,
lowest
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the lowest
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 number of litter was in 2012. In terms of paper, consumption was on top of
chart
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the chart
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 in 2015 with 70
tonnes
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 . At the same time,
collection
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the collection
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 of glass was high too in 2015 (52
tonnes
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).
Besides
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,
four
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for four
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 years paper was a leader of
chart
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the chart
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 other than
2013
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in 2013
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 (40
tonnes
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), in that year glass
shows
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showed
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bigger
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a bigger
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 size (48
tonnes
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).
On the other hand
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, the tins and garden imagined
a low rates
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low rates
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 every
year’s
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years
year
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.
To begin
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 with,
results
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the results
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 of 2012 are poor,
garden
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the garden
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 was 15
tonnes
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 and
tins
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the tins
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 were 27
tonnes
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 which
are
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is
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 less than half the volume.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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