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Request a job letter from enployer Why you need What should be written

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Dear Sir, I am writing formally to request a work experience letter from your esteemed organization. It has been a privilege to work with “Zudio Software” for three years as a “Data Analyst”. Recently, I have been planning for career growth by doing more research in “Masters of Software Development” from a reputed University of Technology in Toronto, Ontario.
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 reason, I need an authorized certificate that highlights my current position, minimum working hours, and key responsibilities at my recent job.
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 certificate would validate and align the connection between my future education and my recent job. I kindly request that the certificate include a summary of my main duties like data handling, and giving commands for various codes and file datasets. I would sincerely appreciate it if you could provide me with
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 desired paper before December 1, 2024,
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 a tight timeline. After that, I would not be able to upload as the deadline would be expired. I am very grateful and tenure for all the opportunities and accomplishments I received. Thank you for your time & assistance. Yours faithfully, Sarah
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Task Achievement
The essay provides a clear and formal request, aligning the current job with future educational goals. Ensure the request letter is slightly more formal, especially in language tone, for improved professionalism.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay maintains logical sequencing of information, but a clearer transition between the intent of the letter and details of job responsibilities could enhance existing coherence.
Task Achievement
The essay clearly outlines the reason for the request, the writer's current position, and the specific requirements from the certificate.
Coherence and Cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are effectively present, enclosing the purposes and a polite request together.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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