The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in sir cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in sir cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented table represents the statistics of the underground train systems in six
cities
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. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that the highest
commuters
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number of commuters
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using
this
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mode is in Tokyo.
Moreover
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, London is the city having the longest track compared to others. Turning to the three
cities
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listed
on
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in
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the report, namely London, Paris, and Tokyo, London was opened earlier than both of them, 37 years before Paris
operating
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operated
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this
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system.
In addition
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,
this
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city has the longest route,
by
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apply
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doubling
number
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a number
the number
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of the rest of the
cities
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at 394
kilometers
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kilometres
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.
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, the capacity of
this
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mode only carries
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less
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lest
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than 1000 individuals compared to Paris (1191) and Tokyo (1927)
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, the rest of the categories, Washington DC is the oldest underground railway system which
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ten times longer than Kyoto and Lost Angles.
This
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train
also
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has a lot of space for 144
passangers
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passengers
, three times higher than the rest
cities
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.
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, Kyoto is the shortest system which can be utilized
for
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by
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people using
train
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the train
a train
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railway system
  • route length
  • annual passengers
  • opening date
  • established
  • network
  • passenger numbers
  • comparison
  • geographical location
  • urban transit
  • infrastructure
  • length of the route
  • serve
  • capacity
  • system expansion
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