The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in sir cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented table represents the statistics of the underground train systems in six
cities
. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that the highest Use synonyms
commuters
using Correct quantifier usage
number of commuters
this
mode is in Tokyo. Linking Words
Moreover
, London is the city having the longest track compared to others.
Turning to the three Linking Words
cities
listed Use synonyms
on
the report, namely London, Paris, and Tokyo, London was opened earlier than both of them, 37 years before Paris Change preposition
in
operating
Wrong verb form
operated
this
system. Linking Words
In addition
, Linking Words
this
city has the longest route, Linking Words
by
doubling Change preposition
apply
number
of the rest of the Change the article
a number
the number
cities
at 394 Use synonyms
kilometers
. Change the spelling
kilometres
However
, the capacity of Linking Words
this
mode only carries Linking Words
Correct your spelling
less
lest
than 1000 individuals compared to Paris (1191) and Tokyo (1927)
Correct your spelling
less
On the other hand
, the rest of the categories, Washington DC is the oldest underground railway system which Linking Words
has
ten times longer than Kyoto and Lost Angles. Verb problem
is
This
train Linking Words
also
has a lot of space for 144 Linking Words
passangers
, three times higher than the rest Correct your spelling
passengers
cities
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Kyoto is the shortest system which can be utilized Linking Words
for
people using Change preposition
by
train
.Add an article
the train
a train
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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