The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feautres and make comparisons where relevant

The line graphs display the

percentage

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of electrical appliances in a given country and

result

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the result

a result

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of how much time people spent on housework from 1920 to 2019.

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, the

percentage

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of households

included

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including

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washing machines ,

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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and vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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are boosted dramatically . All the house had their own

refigerator

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refrigerator

and

vauum

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vacuum

cleaner in 20 th century .Since the application of

electrial

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electrical

applians

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appliances

appliance

, the time of

house work

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housework

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per week

are

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is

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decreased. In 1920, the vacuum cleaner was unpopular , almost 0% of house owned ,

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washing machines had the highest rate which was 40

percents

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percent

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.

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,the proportion

vacuum

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of vacuum

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cleaner

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cleaners

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rose

signicficently

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significantly

to 100

percents

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percent

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in 1980 and remained

still

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so

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in 2019. The washing machine increased

grudualy

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gradually

and

reach

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reached

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70

percent

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per cent

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in 1960. The

the

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apply

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rate slightly decreased to about 62

percent

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per cent

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and increased to over 70 per cent in 2019 . It was

also

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te

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the

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lowest

percentage

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of

household

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households

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.

One third

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of people owned a

refigerator

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refrigerator

in 2019. The

percentage

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boost

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boosted

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sharply and

reach

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reached

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the

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plateau in 2000.

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, the number of

hours

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of housework

from50

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from 50

hours

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declinded considerablely

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declined considerably

to 20.

hours

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per

weak

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week

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. The rate

begun

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began

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dropping slightly to below 20

percent

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per cent

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.

The

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They

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reached the lowest point 10

hours

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per week.