47.The table below shows the worldwide market share of notebook computer manufacturers in the year 2006, 2007 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

47.The table below shows the worldwide market share of notebook computer manufacturers in the year 2006, 2007 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table gives information about the global
market
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share of the notebook computing
market
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for 7 companies in the period 2006 and 2007 .
Overall
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it is clear That
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the highest share
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was HP in 2006 and 2007 ,
while
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the lowest could be seen in Fujitsu-Siemens . the other companies were in the middle with different changes. In 2006 the highest amount of shares
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in HP around 31.4 and Dell came next with 16.6 shares both remained at the top in 2007 with a
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increase to 34 in HP and 20.0 in Dell which went up about 4 per cent,
in contrast
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, Fujitus-siemens was the lowest in both years in 2006 about 4.8 and decreased dramatically to 2.3 . With regard to Acer the
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share shows around 11.6 in 2006 and
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in 2007 dropped slightly to 10.7 ,
on the other hand
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, Toshiba was roughly 6.2 in 2006 and in 2007 climbed to 7.3 as opposed to Acer . Regarding Lenovo stayed stable in 2006 with 6.6 shares and declined to 6.2
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