The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
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The given chart depicts the
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of
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in various activities at a social
center
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in Melbourne, for the period between 2000-2004. From an
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the most popular social activity was the film club,
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the amateur dramatics gradually fell down.
To begin
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with, the film club showed the most stable and high interest among participants. The start point of
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activity was almost 65
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and had
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change in 2010 when the
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of
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was 60. The table tennis and musical performances had the same trend. At the beginning of the shown period, the
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of participants in the table tennis clubs was 18, there was dramatic growth from 2010 and in 2020 there were more than 50 persons interested in
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sort of activity. The interest of people in musical performances started in 2005 and moved upward when reached 19
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in 2020.
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, the
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of participants in amateur dramatics courses declined to the lowest level. There were nearly 30 people at the beginning of
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2000, during
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2010 there were fewer than 20
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and
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in 2020 only nearly 5 people attended these classes.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, members with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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