The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Aisu2

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Aisu2
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The line graph presents the
numeral
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number
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of shops that stopped operating and the amount of stores that
was
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established in the countryside from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
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,
this
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is a graph which shows the closures and openings of stores between 2011-2018. To start with, the number of shops that opened in 2011 was about 8,500 but, it dramatically decreased in 2012 up to 4,000. From 2012 to 2014 it started increasing steadily and it became 6,000 from 4,000, but from 2014 it reduced to 4,000 in 2015. The next two years it stayed steadiness up to 4,000 in 2017, and the
last
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year the store opening saw a decline of about 3,000. The closures of shops in 2011
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close to 6,500 and after a year it saw a descending trend
around
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6,000. In 2013 it went up for 7,000 and
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downward tendency in 2014 approximately 6,000 closures. In the next
year
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it shows a rapid decline from 6,000 to roughly 800. In 2016 was an upward tendency near 5,000 which stayed at a plateau until 2018.
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