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The diagram shows how to recycle rainwater. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how to recycle rainwater. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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 diagram depicts a
water
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 processing system in an Australian town and explains how it recycles rainwater for human consumption. The
water
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 recycling facilities illustrated include parts that are attached to individual houses and a shared underground network. There are 3 main parts of the rainwater recycling process.
Firstly
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, the precipitation is collected. It is
then
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 filtered afterwards.
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Lastly
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 it goes through a chemical process before it is transferred back to houses for use. There are 2 sets of pipes attached to every individual building, each set with different purposes. One set of
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pipes transfers rainwater from the houses to the underground
water
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 processing system.
Anther
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Another
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 set of pipes transfers clean drinking
water
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 from the
water
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 recycling system back to individual households for consumption.
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 there are 2 tanks in
purification
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the purification
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 network, one of them is merely for storage and another is for
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chemical treatment to remove toxic substances for safe
consumptions
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consumption
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