The two maps below show an island, after and before the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate an
island
that had undergone dramatic changes after some tourist amenities were constructed.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the number of trees on Linking Words
this
Linking Words
island
has not changed and all the changes - including the accommodations, restaurant, reception, port, etc – are in the centre and west of the Use synonyms
island
.
When it comes to accommodations, a network of nine cottages are exactly in the centre and six cottages in the west were constructed on the Use synonyms
island
and connected to each other by footpath. In the south, the Pier port was added to the Use synonyms
island
.
In terms of the restaurant and reception buildings which are located on the northwest and west of the Use synonyms
island
respectively, are connected to the port by vehicle track. It is noteworthy that from Use synonyms
this
vehicle trek to the unchanged beach, there are connections by footpath. Linking Words
Finally
, a swimming place has Linking Words
set
up Add a missing verb
been set
in
northwest of the beach.Change preposition
apply
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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