The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line chart illustrates how the
number
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of tourists who visited a particular Caribbean island changed from 2010 to 2017. In 2010, the
number
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of visitors staying on the island was about 0.75 billion and
this
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figure remained stable until 2011. In the following two years, there was a significant increase to 1.5
million
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before it kept constant again between 2013 and 2015. During the
last
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two years, the
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experienced some fluctuations
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but ended at 1.5
million
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, equal to the
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from 2013 to 2015. The
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of visitors staying on cruise ships in 2010 stood at only approximately 0.3
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, much lower than those staying on the island. It saw a slight rise of 0.2
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to 0.5
million
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in 2011,
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it dropped back to the figure of 2010. After that, there was a dramatic growth and overtook the
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of its counterparts in around 2016, reaching its peak of 2
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at the end
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of the period.
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,
it is clear that
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the total
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of tourists grew consistently, especially from 2016 to 2017 when it increased significantly to the maximum (3.5
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).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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