The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts present average

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dioxide

emissions

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per person in four countries the United Kingdom, Sweden,Italy and Portugal from 1967 until 2007.

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, the United Kingdom and Sweden can decrease their

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emission through the period. Meanwhile, Italy and Portugal continuously increase. Even though

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emissions

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in Italy increased but not exceed the

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emissions

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from the other countries.

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pollution in the United Kingdom decreased steadily from above 10 metric

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to just below 10 metric tonnes.

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, Sweden receded significantly at below 6 metric

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while

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at the beginning are increased from above 8 metric

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to more than 10 metric

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, Italy rose from around 4 metric

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to just below 8 metric

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between 1967 and 1997 and kept below 8 metric

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until 2007.

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, the production of

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emissions

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in Portugal got higher over time at just below 2 metric

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in the beginning to just around 5

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of the period.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that university admission should be given to all school leavers, while others think otherwise. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.