The chart below shows the changes in three differents areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003-2012

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of crime in Manchester middle of

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between 2003 and 2012.   One striking feature is that

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the highest proportion is car theft . Robbery was lowest indication in the

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of crime both increase and decrease apart from robbery . Robbery stayed stable from 2003 to 2012 and equal to approximately 520 people . Car theft increase from roughly 2300 to 2800 people over the period.  The sharpest decline was in burglary whole the time. Its indicator decreased from 3400 people to 1400 . In 2004 the highest proportion is

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equal to approximately 3800.