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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of women jobless patterns in each country of the United
kingdom
in 2013 and 2014. It Capitalize word
Kingdom
clearly seen
that Add the auxiliary verb
is clearly seen
unemployment
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the unemployment
rate
dropped in all provided countries, Use synonyms
excep
Scotland which Correct your spelling
except
in contrast
faced an increase.
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England is
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England's
rate
had been 6.8% by 2013.Use synonyms
Whereas
, Linking Words
Wales is
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Wales's
rate
was 5.4% in 2013, Use synonyms
however
, Wales saw a decrease from 5.4% in 2013 to 5% in 2014. In Linking Words
this
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graph
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graph,
Scotland is
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Scotland's
rate
had been 6.7% than Use synonyms
other
3 countries by 2014. Correct article usage
the other
By
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contrast
Northern Ireland experienced the most significant drop, from 5.6% in 2013 to 4.6% in 2014, making it the region with the lowest Add a comma
contrast,
rate
in 2014. It shows that in Northern Ireland Use synonyms
womens
had Correct your spelling
women
not
immense Correct your spelling
no
dilemma
like Fix the agreement mistake
dilemmas
jobless
.Add a missing verb
being jobless
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