The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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“Percentage of households with electrical appliances" shows the change in

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the ratio

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of houses with electronic devices in use. The

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shows that the percentage of refrigerators in houses rapidly increased from 0% to 90% from 1920 to 1960 respectively,

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it increased to 100% within 20 years(to 1980) and from

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up to 2019 it hasn't changed. The

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of vacuum cleaners in households slowly increased from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000 and

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it remained at the same level. The ratio of washing machines used in houses increased from 40% in 1920 to 70% in 1960

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it decreased to 64% by 1980 and

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it increased to 75% by 2019. The second

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“Number of hours of housework per week, per household" reflects the time spent on household chores per week per house. The

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shows the decrease in the number of hours of housework from 50 in 1920 to 20 in 1960 and

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number slowly decreased to 11 hours in 2019.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

household appliances
time-efficient
labour-saving devices
technological innovations
ownership rate
housework chores
domestic workload
automation
advancements
trend analysis
societal shifts
economic impact
durability
lifespan of appliances
maintenance
historical comparison
time allocation
drudgery reduction
energy consumption
disruption in trends

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