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Some people say children no longer need to develop handwriting skills. Others believe that handwriting is still important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Opinions are often divided on whether some individuals say kids no longer require to
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 handwriting skills.
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, others believe that handwriting is still essential.Both opinions will be analyzed in
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 essay before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. On the one hand, many proponents argue that children no longer need to develop handwriting qualities.
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, it is a technology world and everything is based on the computer.
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 will be computer-based in all nations and every
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 the exam on the computer. In
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 case, it is obvious why many feel certain that kids no longer
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 to develop their handwriting skills.
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, the advocates of the
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 view counter
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 argument by citing that handwriting is still vital. People who typically share
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 point of view usually defend it by arguing that
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handwriting is still important till the secondary
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, in school exams, handwriting
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 important role for the student and
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 is
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 impressed
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 good handwriting.
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, there are
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a handwriting competitions
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 in schools and the top three students get certificates for the best handwriting
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, it is understandable why
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 point of view has garnered support. After looking at both the arguments of those in support
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that handwriting is still important and those in opposition, it can be concluded that
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, it is considered that handwriting is still essential
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nowadays.
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coherence cohesion
Improve logical structure by organizing paragraphs that clearly present one idea or side of the argument at a time.
coherence cohesion
Include a clearer introduction that states both sides and a conclusion summarizing your points and your opinion.
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Provide more specific and relevant examples to support your points.
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Develop a more complete response that fully addresses both sides of the argument and presents a clear opinion.
coherence cohesion
Use transitional phrases to make the essay flow more smoothly and logically.
coherence cohesion
Good attempt at discussing both views and attempting to give a conclusion.
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Recognizes the importance of handwriting in school exams and competitions.

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